This article is the third and final article in a series covering how to write powerful product descriptions that sell.
So far we’ve covered:
If you haven’t already read those, click on the links above to read them first. They’re an important part of filling in the blanks of this template.
Now you can apply the information you uncovered in the first 2 articles of this series to fill in the sections and blanks of this product description template.
To recap, you should now be able to define:
You should play around with your descriptions to see what works best for you and your products. Keep track of:
Below is an effective format for you to follow for your product descriptions.
Add as much or as little as you need to each section based on your product and its information.
There are some additional tips at the end of this article, which are really important to keep in mind. So be sure you don’t miss those!
What’s your headline?
Not your product title. Your opening line.
You need to instantly grab shopper’s attention and entice them to read more.
“Handmade green bag. 12 inches x 16 inches.” Is boring! Not to mention, the shopper probably already got that from the product title and photo before even landing on the listing page.
If you could only say one thing about your product to encourage shoppers to buy, what would it be?
You want your shoppers to immediately understand why they should care about your product. What does it do for them?
Keep the heading short and sweet.
You may use the heading to:
Below are several fill in the blank descriptions for you to try out. Or create your own based on your pain/pleasure/solution/features/benefits/etc.
I started creating _________________ (your product) when I was ________________ (describe your ideal customer) and ______________________ (pain). I was ____________________(specific feeling, e.g. tired/frustrated/fed up) with ______________________ (current options available). I wanted _____________________ (pleasure/dream scenario).
I created a product with ___________________ (features) so that _______________________ (benefits).
I started selling mix and match art prints when I was fresh out of college and renting a small dingy apartment I wasn’t allowed to paint or make changes to. I was tired of feeling like a guest in my own home and wanted a cozy space that reflected my style.
I create colorful pieces of original art and turn them into prints, which are framed and ready to be hung. The pieces in each collection can be mixed and matched to suit any home and fill any wall, big or small, on a budget.
I know how frustrating/difficult/etc. it is when ________________ (current product options available or pain). Which is why I created ________________ (name of product) that has ________________ (features) for _______________ (benefits and or pleasure).
I know how frustrating it is when you find a beautiful knitted hat that looks great on and is incredibly warm but also incredibly itchy. Which is why I created my line of slouchy wool hats with a soft fleece liner to keep your head warm, comfortable and stylish.
For those times when ___________________ (pain), this ________________ (product name) will ________________ (pleasure). It has __________________ (features) to ____________________ (benefits).
For those cold dry winters, this organic hand moisturizer will soothe your skin. It has shea butter and essential oils to deeply moisturize and soften dry, cracked hands.
Perfect for ___________________________ (pleasure), these _______________ (product name) can be _______________ (paint a picture). They’re ______________ (features) to _______________ (benefits). No more _____________________ (pain).
Perfect for looking pulled together and on trend, these bar stud earrings can be worn with any outfit, dressy or casual. They’re made of surgical grade stainless steel and are 100% hypoallergenic. No more red, irritated ears when you take your earrings out.
Most ________________________ (your type of product) are/do/have ___________________ (current product options available). Which causes ___________________ (pain they want to avoid).
My ____________________ (name of product) will/is/has ___________________ (pleasure they want to gain). The _____________________ (features) ensure _____________________ (benefits).
Most pillows are sold individually and can be hard to mix and match once you find one you love. Which means you have to go from store to store looking for the perfect colors and patterns that look good together.
My pillow collections are created so you can choose 2 or more shades of a color, fabric patterns and styles that work together to give your living room a custom, designer look. Each color collection has 10 options to choose from so you can easily find pillows that fit your style and match.
Be sure to think about the specific emotion you want to evoke and how you can help the shopper imagine that positive feeling.
Help shoppers imagine your product in their lives. How will they wear it? Where will they display it? What will they display it with? Where will they use it? How often will they apply it?
These ____________________ (product name) look/pair amazing with ______________ (other items – paint a detailed picture). Perfect for _____________________ (occasion) at ____________________ (place) in the ________________ (time – e.g. evening/winter/summer/etc.), when you want to feel ___________________________ (pleasure). They have ______________ (feature) so that ________________ (benefit).
This wood beaded tassel necklace looks amazing with a basic tee or tank, jean shorts and a messy bun. Perfect for those hot summer days in the park when you want to look casual but pulled together. The necklace has a clasp at the back so you can adjust the length and have the tassel sit in the right spot.
This/these ______________________ (product name) look/s great displayed with ____________________(paint a detailed picture). Perfect for _______________________ (place) to give the space a __________________ feel. They’re _______________(feature) for ______________(benefit).
This modern triangle quilt in soft greens and blues looks amazing with grey and white decor in a baby’s room but will work well with any neutrals or warm toned blues. Perfect for a nursery to add a bit of color but keep the space calming. It’s 100% cotton with warm cotton batting and is 42 by 36 inches. The perfect size to cuddle baby with, cover them up in a stroller or fold over the side of a crib without too much bulk.
Use/Consume (bath & body products, stationery, toys, food items, etc.)
This/these _________________________ (product name) is/are perfect for _________________________ (E.g. dry skin, staying organized, sparking the imagination, a snack, etc.) at ______________________ (time they might be used/consumed. E.g. relaxing bath time, work days, play time, before the gym). They’re ______________ (feature) for _____________ (benefit).
This wooden X & O game is perfect for keeping kids occupied and entertained during road trips. Each piece is made out of certified wood with no toxins so it’s safe for all ages and can be washed as needed. Each X and O piece has a drilled hole that fits on the grid’s pegs so pieces stay in place as the board is passed back and forth in the car.
This/these ___________________________ (product name) make the perfect gift for ______________________ (person) on ________________ (occasion). _______________ (customer or recipient) will love _________________ (feature) for ______________ (benefit).
This set of 10 Christmas cards is perfect to give to your quirky friends and family who could use a good laugh during the stressful holidays. You’ll love having a unique set of Christmas cards on hand to quickly send out when you get an unexpected card in the mail or a guest who pops by with fruit cake. The perfect way to say “thanks” or let someone know you’re thinking of them.
Describe the details of your handmade product the shopper can and can’t see through the photos.
If you didn’t cover all the features in the last section, point out anything else that may be important. If you’ve already pointed out each product feature in the last section, simply go back and ensure you were descriptive enough.
Use this trick:
Imagine there are no photos of your products. How would you describe it to someone?
“Green bag, 16 inches by 12 inches. Handmade” may turn into:
“A stylish laptop bag with a long adjustable strap as well as two handles so you can wear this bag comfortably across your body or hold it as a handbag. It’s a classic bowler shape, perfect size for even the biggest laptop, with a relaxed, casual feel. The green material is thick and durable and the jacquard texture adds a touch of elegance, complimented beautifully with gold hardware on the straps, zipper and pockets.”
Be sure this section also describes exactly what the buyer will be getting.
If you’ve taken lifestyle photos, photographed your products as part of a vignette or are showing more than one product within one photo, be sure you explain what is and isn’t part of the listing. You don’t want your buyer to think they’re getting a set of three when only one item in the photo is actually for sale.
This section is optional but may really help close the deal and sell the shopper on your product. Consider whether you can add any of the following.
And finally, keep the following in mind for each of your descriptions.
Here’s how I might put everything together and write a description for my laptop bag.
Finally! A laptop bag that’s stylish & functional
I started creating laptop bags when I was a part-time student running back and forth from school to work. I was tired of hauling an unattractive bag around all day, but I needed everything with me and organized.
I wanted a bag:
I created this laptop bag using a fashion-forward design so it looks like a purse, not a book bag. The bag is 12” tall, 16” wide and 10” deep so it can fit a large laptop and plenty of books. The 10 interior and exterior pockets keep everything organized while the interfacing and double-stitching ensure this bag will stand up to heavy use.
Wear this laptop bag any way you like to avoid those kinks in your shoulder.
This bag is made in a classic moss green, durable jacquard material with gold hardware on the straps, zipper and pockets.
It has been featured in the style section of Fashion magazine’s spring edition, along with the matching clutch (link to clutch would go here), which can organize your personal belongings inside the laptop bag or used as a purse when you want to leave the big bag at your desk or in your car.
Add this laptop bag to your shopping cart and it will be shipped the next day using priority shipping to get your package to you in 2 – 5 business days.
If you sell products such as jewelry, greeting cards, etc. your description may be shorter. You can still follow the same template, however there may be less to say when it comes to the features and benefits.
Not every description requires a story or multiple paragraphs. But do be sure you keep it interesting, show shoppers you put effort into every aspect of your business and find a way to get them excited about your product.
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